Peter DeLeo has an incredible, amazing survival story to tell. So why doesn't it make an incredible, amazing book?
In
November 1994, a plane piloted by DeLeo and carrying two other passengers
crashed deep in California's Sierra Nevada range. With a broken ankle,
broken ribs and a broken shoulder, he hiked out through deep snow in 13
days, eating only bugs to survive. He didn't make it out in time for his
two friends to be rescued. Both Wave Hatch and Lloyd Matsumoto died
at the site of the crash.
In "Survive!," adventure story fans can live
vicariously through DeLeo's ordeal,
DeLeo shows that he had to be
smart to survive. He chose his route carefully to avoid going in
circles. He learned to pick a good shelter (a rocky cave – too cold;
the hollowed out trunk of a tree – good). He made sure to dry his
clothes in the afternoon sun. I sometimes questioned his choices– at
one point he spent several hours climbing a tree to get a better view – but the fact is, he made it out under almost impossible conditions, so he clearly did something right.
Still,
questions nag at this book. For starters, the author often seems just
too cool and analytical about his horrible ordeal. A normal person would
be saying, "My broken bones are killing me! I've only eaten bugs for
days and I'm starving! I'm wet and cold and just plain exhausted!"
But
DeLeo instead portrays himself as carefully analyzing the crust of the
snow, the angle of the sun, the droppings of wild animals, and the color
of his urine (many times). Is this the way he really is, or is this
just the way he wants to portray himself?
Was it really necesary to show DeLeo's whole hiking route in the map in Chapter Three, thus giving away much of the story?
And
why was it DeLeo and not Wave who walked out? DeLeo describes Wave as
having just a bruise on the forehead after the crash. DeLeo had 16
broken bones. Wouldn't it have made a lot more sense for Wave to have
gone for help?
I might have been able to let that one go if it
hadn't been for the online postings of some other reviewers who
pointed out that DeLeo left out some important details.
For
starters, DeLeo never mentions that the investigation
by the National Traffic Safety Board found that the crash was his fault
for flying too low in a box canyon.
Second, while DeLeo mentions
making a plan with Wave to use the emergency locator transmitter from
the plane, he never mentions, even in the epilogue, that the ELT was
found still in the plane, not turned on and lacking a required antenna.
True, DeLeo doesn't lie about these things but he clearly dodges them – because both make him look bad.
You might note that the book isn't really about the crash or the ELT,
it's about DeLeo's survival ordeal. So, does his evasion on those two
topics really matter to the rest of the book? Yes, they do.
In this
type of book, you're completely dependent on the author to recount
events honestly – there are no other witnesses. So you've got to trust
the author to be giving you the straight story. Unfortunately these
issues cast just enough doubt to make readers wonder: "How much of the
truth am I getting?"
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